One day !
If one day you feel like crying...
call me
I don't promise that I will make u luagh,
But I can cry with you..
If one day you want to run away...
Don't be afraid to call me
I don't promise to ask you to stay,
But I can run with you.
If one day you don't want to listen to anybody,
Call me.
I promise to be very quiet.
But,
If one day you call
and there is no answer...
Come fast to see me,
Perhaps I need you.
call me
I don't promise that I will make u luagh,
But I can cry with you..
If one day you want to run away...
Don't be afraid to call me
I don't promise to ask you to stay,
But I can run with you.
If one day you don't want to listen to anybody,
Call me.
I promise to be very quiet.
But,
If one day you call
and there is no answer...
Come fast to see me,
Perhaps I need you.
9 Comments:
Hummmmmmmm!!! good one...
If that one day will pass then try to make promise for tommrrow coz i need you...and this one day will go and go on and when its one day next version is coming...hope this one day first part........
By Mukesh Marwah, at 8:25 PM
chaRUL..
I fell crying..
I wanna run away...
Nobody is listening to me...
:):):):)
nice poem..
Roy
By Anonymous, at 11:14 AM
But,
If one day you call
and there is no answer...,
;)
check ur mobile balance.. you need to take recharge coupon :)
By janak chandarana, at 3:06 AM
trn trn...
ya what about missed calls..
well its nice... but seems like a forward,,,..
Arrey kutch likh na.. acha sa.. khud..
By AlterinG Abhishek, at 8:48 PM
hi,
moving by, get ur nice blog.....
well, nice poem...........bt suna hau hai....
anyways, nice blog n post too.
By Santosh Jena, at 9:26 PM
Wassup?
By Anonymous, at 12:26 PM
After a long time I came here... thanxs to all guys for their comments.
I discovered lot of new things in last so many days which would surely come in my new posts :)
@Mukesh
hmmm! thanks a ton ! :)
but i think its only one and final version for me... but may be if i would be in same condition then surely second part can come ! :)
@ROy
:):)
who is not listening Roy ?
U r Rocking then why jocking ? :):)
@Janak
Very Funny !!! :)
@Abhishek
hmmm abt misscall .... will come in second version
ab sab accha hi likhana hai :)
@Santosh
Welcome to my small blogworld !!
glad u like it ! par kabhi kabhi suna hua phir se sunne me achha lagta hai ..isnt it ?!?!:))
thankx 4 appereciating my blog !
@Amit
sorry 4 not visiting ur blog from so many days
will come soon !!
By charul, at 1:57 PM
Aree baba...ur one day is not over till now still in dream abe when next day will come and new blog will start
By Mukesh Marwah, at 8:55 PM
new post coming soon.
keep watching :D
By janak chandarana, at 11:00 PM
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